This one is a treat--I am so proud to present a book I had the opportunity to edit, a really unusual work--Captured Minds by Rebecca Odum!
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Captured Minds
Living a peaceful life is supposed to be ideal, but what if it’s what makes
you the perfect victim? For the last
decade, famine has had the thriving land of Zoar in its grip. With money and
food dwindling, seventeen-year-old Raven Montgomery longs for something more
than working in the library. Driven by her love of learning, she enters a
competition hosted by the Other World, where she will test her knowledge in
order to win supplies Zoar desperately needs.
Before she can do so, Zoar’s ruler is killed, and hours later the Other
World closes its door. Raven can’t believe the two events are connected. Yet,
when she stumbles across Other World technology that holds classified
information, she learns there may be more to the competition than meets the
eye. Sure that her ruler’s death is somehow linked, she now faces the challenge
of revealing the truth behind the Other World’s sinister ways before both lands
are changed forever.
Excerpt:
Union City, Zoar
“Imagine
never opening a textbook or sitting at a desk. Imagine having the information
you learn in school being handed to you without lifting a finger. For the kids
of today and tomorrow, this can be a reality….”
The words blurred together and
Raven Montgomery rubbed her eyes. No homework? No tests? She squinted at the
tiny writing in the right hand corner. New
York, it read.
That’s
in the Other World. Maybe it’s magic after all.
On the bedside table, her mirror
flashed green. She snatched it up and found a new message. She touched the
screen, and the Ruler’s face appeared.
“Good evening, Zoarians. I am
pleased to announce that starting at nine tomorrow morning, the Competition
Board will be accepting applications.”
Raven turned off the mirror and
took in her wall-to wall bookshelves. In less than an hour, she’d gather with
kids who owned as many books as she did. Today she wasn’t the lone girl no one
understood, unable to control her need to voice the information running through
her head.
Bet
everyone there can pick up one of their books and recall every single word of
information on every page.
She slowly moved to her chair and
was halfway to the closet when her bedroom door opened. Her older sister, Kate strode into the room,
already dressed in a white short-sleeved dress, a black belt around her waist.
She'd pinned her long, straight red hair in a bun. What stood out most was the red lipstick,
almost like blood next to her whitish complexion. Raven bit back a laugh. She
looked like one of those women in the magazines she’d found in the attic
once—perfectly put together.
“What?” Kate cocked her head to the
side. “Stop looking at me like that. I want to look my best.”
Raven’s giggle died, and she put on
her signature pout, used only in the presence of her family. Since when did
Kate care about looking her best?
“And I don’t? Gee, thanks.” She glided her hand along the row of dresses.
“I have no idea what to wear. Where’s Ava? She promised she’d help.” She
usually threw on the first unwrinkled dress, much to her other sister’s dismay,
but today was important.
“Ava said to wear this.” Kate tossed a solid blue short-sleeved dress
onto the bed. “Hurry! Mom said we gotta
leave in an hour.” She patted Raven’s
shoulder and walked out of the room.
Raven peeled off her nightshirt and
slipped on the dress. She ran a brush through her long, straight black hair,
pulled it back into a high ponytail and dug out her heels from the back of the
closet. With the folded application in
her pocket, she made her way into the living room. Ava, Kate’s twin, sat on the
couch with her best friend Maggie Tisdale,who was clad in her favorite red
dress and black heels. Maggie’s long
blonde hair wasn’t in its usual braid, but flowed freely down her shoulders.
“There you are.” Ava said with a
smile. “You both look beautiful. Blue is the perfect color on you. Brian says
there’s already a line.” She wrapped her
flowered robe around herself, her red hair in a messy bun—a far cry from the
usual dresses, makeup and fancy heels she wore every day.
“Let’s go! We’ll be waiting in line until next
Tuesday,” Maggie said, tugging on Raven’s arm. “I want to get there before I
lose my nerve.”
Raven started for the door, but a
sharp pain slicing through her temple and down her right arm and leg made her
freeze. In all the excitement, she hadn’t anticipated pain this early.
How
stupid can I be? Mom will probably make me take my chair, too.
Tears prickled her eyelids, but she
refused to let them fall. She stood at Kate’s waist. People already jumped to
conclusions.
“Here, honey.” Her mother’s hands
were steady as she injected Raven with the needle and took a step back. “Let me get a picture of you two.”
Raven sighed and put her arms around Maggie’s shoulders, their
heads touching. There was no one else could she stand next to and not feel like
an insect. Since Maggie’s family had moved in across the street four years ago,
the two were inseparable. She was grateful every day to have someone to share
her unusual height, brittle bones, pain that felt like needles down her legs and arms and headaches
with. Not to mention the need of a wheelchair.
I
better not need it today.
“Okay. All done. Go have fun.”
“Thanks!” Raven followed Maggie
outside. At the end of the drive a carriage waited, its doors open. Brian,
Ava’s fiancé, stood next to it clad in his green Guard’s uniform. His light
brown hair was slicked back, a mischievous glint in his brown eyes.
“You’re the best guy Ava could’ve
picked to marry,” Raven said. She dangled the folded up piece of paper in his
face. “You think your new job can get me instant results?”
Brian laughed and patted her arm.
“Not a chance, little lady.” He opened the door and helped her and Maggie
inside. “I’ll be up front with the driver.”
She took in the familiar scenes of
the city as the carriage bounced down the street: people walking along the
sidewalks past the one-story brown houses that lined the street on both sides,
children holding hands as they walked to the schoolhouse, parents on their way
to work. It wasn’t hard to pick out those that were turning in their
application. People dressed up for the occasion. To have your name picked to
take the exam was an honor, and everyone took it seriously. The square already
swarmed with people when they approached the palace and the carriage stopped a
few blocks away. The line ran down the sidewalk, past the diner and clothing
store.
The early morning breeze blew a
strand of hair into her face as Brian lifted her out of the carriage. Once
Maggie was down, the two linked arms and made their way to the back of the
line. The sun radiated intense heat from a light purple sky, and Raven fanned
her face.
“I’ll see you shortly.” Brian waved and disappeared through the gate
to join the other guards. The line inched forward and Raven could not hold back
a grin. In a few short minutes they’d deliver their application.
“I’m so nervous,” Maggie said,
twirling her hair around her left hand. “Why did I let you talk me into this?”
Raven gently took Maggie’s hand in
her own. “You’ll be fine. We both will. We can do this.” The line started to
move and she pulled Maggie after her.
“Everyone, please hand your
application to the nearest guard and be on your way,” a guardsman shouted.
Murmurs floated through the crowd
as Raven searched for Brian. He’d know what the announcement was about. He
arrived by their side seconds later, his expression grave.
“What’s happening?” she blurted.
“The Ruler was found dead.”
Author
Bio
RA Odum grew up and still lives
in Georgia. Her love for writing and stories started in her grandmother’s attic
and never stopped. Born sixteen weeks early and loss of vision in one eye, RA
faces obstacles head on. From the time
she was very small, she has had a host of characters in her head, screaming for
their stories to be told. When she is not writing, she loves to spend time with
her family, sing and read. She also enjoys learning and teaching others
American Sign Language. She hopes her novels will inspire and make a
difference.
Facebook author page: https://www.facebook.com/RAOdum
Twitter: https://twitter.com/RaOdum
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I think the blog ate my comment, haha!!! Anyway, so glad I stopped by today. This sounds like an awesome read!
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure why it did that! I haven't deleted any comments. But yes, it IS an awesome read. And I was fortunate enough to edit it!
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